I was wondering what things I did well with this poem, and what i need to fix up?
E M O T I O N
In the darkness,
Anne’s voice comes to us again,
The days aren’t so bad
Our
P r o t e c to r s
We call,
Them
Mr. Kraler
Meip,
I only want some fun though
Someone to laugh and
C L O W N
With.
After you’ve sat
Still
All day,
And hardly
Move
You’ve got to have some
F U N
By: Maddie Smith
Period 2
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I like the style of this piece and the way you used the words from the play. I could remember some of the lines and it made sense.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did this piece and how it all came together.
ReplyDeleteThis piece came together very well.
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