This I Believe
I believe that people wear masks. In their daily life, for girls they have a lot of masks that they where. When people are gossiping they put on a mask. When they want to fit it or only be a jock or a preppy girl they form a mask that traps them into lies of un-forgiveness. People also where faith masks. When they want to let people no they are praying or doing this or doing that just so they stand out and other people want to be like them. I believe you shouldn’t do things for others. Masks trap you into things that lead to murder, jail, sin, and hurt relationships. But remember some masks are good.
I don't want the title as This I believe, is there a better title for this piece?
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
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I really like this this I believe, I totally agree with you because people these days really do seem like the wear masks. I think people should be themselves and not fall into peer pressure, over all this is a very good piece, could you make it any longer though? :)
ReplyDeleteI like this piece. I believe that people shouldn't be different to try to fit in, so many people do and it causes a lot of problems. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou could change the title to somthing like... Masks of Life. But overall nice piece. You are showing a good point
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